गुलाबाचं फूल

Started by Pramod Pawar, November 13, 2014, 09:39:17 AM

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Darsh rocks

Khupach chan kavita aahe

impressive !!!


Vidyadhar R Mohite

Good One Pramod Pawar !!!  तुने तो दिल कि बात छीनली

Pramod Pawar

Thanks a lot Vidhyadhar :)

Really Appreciated !!!

Rahul Bagle

kharach aahe ki gulabach phool ek premach pratik asate

Nice poem keep it up

Yogesh malekar

Abhi abhi to pyar ka PC kiya hai chaaloo,
Apne dil ke HARDDISK par aur kitni FILES daaloo.
Apne chehare se ruswaai ka ERROR to hatao,
Ai jaaneman apne dil ka PASSWORD to batao.
Woh to ham hai jo aapki chahat dil main rakhte hai,
Warna aap jaisa SOFTWARE to bazaar main BAHUT milte hai.
Roz rat aap mere sapne main aate ho,
Mere pyar ka MOUSE banake ungalion pe nachate ho.
Tere pyar ka E-MAIL mere dil ko lubhata hai,
Par bich mein tere bap ka VIRUS aa jata hai.
Aur karwaoge humse kitna intezaar,
Hamare dil ke SITE pe kabhi ENTER to maro yaar.
Apni insult ka badla dekho kaise loonga,
Jaaneman ter bap ko SHIFT DELETE kar doonga.
Aapke nakhare apne dil pe BANG ho gaye,
Do PC judte judte HANG ho gaye.
Aap jaiso ke liye dil ko CUT diya karte hai,
Varna baki cases mein to COPY PASTE kiya karte hai.
Aap ka hasna aap ka chalna aap ki woh style,
Aap ki adaon ki hamne SAVE hai kar lee FILE.

Kuldeep Pandey

Supperb...lines Sir, please keep it up the good work...!!!!!!!!!!

Pramod Pawar

Thanks Rahul  & Kuldeep

Please keep on watching my  new post

moreshwar