all three poems are good.
"Themb" is quite touching.It depicts an experience of life.The refraining line "Olawa-------------"reflects the warmth of feelings.The poem flows on smoothly.
"Mi---------" brings out the "I" quite strongly.An artist pampers his ego,his individuality. In fact every man has to do it to become different and consequently impressive and noticeable.the process brings in a restlessness in the person.But as time passes ,this "I" loses its sharp edges ,smoothens,mellows and mixes with the universal "I".It loses the restlessness.The process leads to calming down this restlessness and to achieve a peace of mind in becoming one with others.
"Maze Dwand"also reflects a mood.The poem has a rhythm and rime and flows on with an ease.
Aai also liked the poems.
My friend Prof.Jameer Momin has especially liked the poem "Themb".He will post his impressions after some time.