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थेंब
« on: July 21, 2012, 10:16:15 PM »
थेंब
कित्येक येतात, कित्येक जातात
गालांवरचे थेंब होतात
काही ओघळतात, काही थबकतात
ओलावा मात्र कायम ठेवतात

काही सुखद असतात
तर काही दुःख देतात
काही सलतात,
तर काही खुपतात

गालांवरून फाटे नक्कीच फुटतात
हसवे ओठांपाशी पोहोचतात
रडवे कानांमागे विरतात

काही नदी बनून वाहतात
काही डबके साचवतात
काही हुल्लडबाज असतात
काही अनुभवाने येतात

सर्व कसे वेगवेगळे असतात
पण रस्ता मात्र गालाचाच धरतात
काही ओघळतात, काही थबकतात
ओलावा मात्र कायम ठेवतात...

                                   .....सुधन्वा

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 10:23:42 PM »
Apratim Kavita !!!! last kadva tumchya lekhni cha mana var tasha umtavun gela

सर्व कसे वेगवेगळे असतात
पण रस्ता मात्र गालाचाच धरतात
काही ओघळतात, काही थबकतात
ओलावा मात्र कायम ठेवतात...

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2012, 10:40:56 PM »
धन्यवाद

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2012, 04:47:15 PM »
kavitech title mag aashru hawe hote

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #4 on: July 23, 2012, 11:27:23 AM »
title is used metaphorically
-Sudhanwa

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 12:24:20 PM »
sundar kavita....

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 01:08:28 PM »
dhanyawaad

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #7 on: July 25, 2012, 08:06:54 AM »
Sudhanwa,
all three poems are good.
"Themb" is quite touching.It depicts an experience of life.The refraining line "Olawa-------------"reflects the warmth of feelings.The poem flows on smoothly.
"Mi---------" brings out the "I" quite strongly.An artist pampers his ego,his individuality. In fact every man has to do it to become different and consequently impressive and noticeable.the process brings in a restlessness in the person.But as time passes ,this "I" loses its sharp edges ,smoothens,mellows and mixes with the universal "I".It loses the restlessness.The process leads to calming down this restlessness and to achieve a  peace of mind in becoming one with others.
"Maze Dwand"also reflects a mood.The poem has a rhythm and rime and flows on with an ease.
Aai also liked the poems.
My friend Prof.Jameer Momin has especially liked the poem "Themb".He will post his impressions after some time.

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #8 on: May 07, 2013, 04:57:25 PM »

थेंब
काही नदी बनून वाहतात
काही डबके साचवतात.........

खूप छान आहे कविता!

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Re: थेंब
« Reply #9 on: May 07, 2013, 05:26:50 PM »
thanks Milind..

 

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