Marathi Kavita : मराठी कविता

Mitra,
Mala vatat apan kavita karto te aplyala annd milava ani vachnaryala anand milava mhnun. hyacha arth yamak, gamak hyala kahich mahtv nahi as nahi. te nissnshay mahtvacha ah. mhnunch Mangesh PAdgaokar, Swati PRabhu, Balkavi hyanchya kavita ajaramar ahet. mala vatat kavitet don prakar astat. Ek jyala ek upjastach lay aste. ani dusri jyala lay nasate pan sadhya shbdat yamak julavaycha praytn karun kavitecha tyala saj chadhavalela asto.


Mi swtaha dusrya prakarat mala baghto. Mi kavita karto karan mala tyatun anand milto. Majhya kavitevar koni dad dili tar mala nischit anand hoto pan nahi dili tari mala vait vatat nahi. Ani mala vatate ki he jast mahtwach ahe.


Ajun ek gosht..... gairsamaj nasava.... pan khar sanga... kavi Grase yanchya kavita kiti janana nit samajtat. Mi tyancha vaman karat nahiye. Mala as mhnayachy kavita samajan, avadan, karan he pratyekachya dyanavar avlambun ast. jashya motya mansanchya goshti lahan mulana kalat nahit, shiklya savarlelya mansanchya bata ashikshit lokana kalat nahit, modern art samanyana kalat nahi tasach he ahe. hyat kuthlich gosht changli, vait, barobar, chuk nasate.


Kavite kade vyakt honyach ek sadhan mhnun jar baghitl tar mala vatat kavita  kashi karavi ha prashn yenarach nahi.


As pan bagha,Kavita konti prasidhd hote. Kiti kavita aplya lakshat rahatat. Prtyek gan he survatila kavita aste. tyala sur ani talachi vastr chadhli ki tyach gan hot ani mag te saglyanchya mukhi rahat.


Tasech kavita kashi vachavi he samjn jast mahtvach ahe. KAran majhya sarkhya sadhya kavinchya kavita hya gaddya sarkhya vachlya tar tya kavita vatnarch nahit. Asha kavita eka dhimya gatini vachlya tarch tya kavita vatatat. Far kashala.   "Mai Shayar to NAhi, Magar e Hasi, Jabse dekha, Maine  Tujhko, Mukjhko, Shayari Aa Gai" he gan mahitch nahiye as thodavel samja ani ata hich vaky ekhada pyaregraf vachlya sarki vacha. nischit ti kavita, gan vatanar nahi.


Mhnun mhnto kavita aplyala havi tashi lihavi. Tila dusryani kavita mhnav, gan mhnav ka gaddy mhnava ha jyachya tyachya dnyanacha, avdicha ani patalicha prashn ahe.


hya vishayavar mi pudhil don athavdyat don kavita post karin. Ani Milind tujhya kadun tyavar abhipray milava ashi apeksha nkki thevin..


to paryant ek mitr mhanun sangto.......KAvita karat raha......jamtil tashya...... jamtil tenva..... jamtil titkya..... kautukachi apeksha thev pan havyas theu nako...... shikaycha praytn kar.... pan to paryant kavita karan sodu nakos.....


All the best

totally agree with kedar sir ............ kavita hi kadhihi svatachya anadasathi karavi ........ etarana avadel ki nahi ha vichar karun kadhi kavita karu naye ........ khar sangayach tar kadhi kadhi moth mothya kavinchi alankarik bhasha vaparleli kavita mazya sarkhya samanya vachakanchya dokya varun jate .... sopya shabdat lihileli kavita patakan samajate ani manala jast bhavate hi .........

chala ata kavita karuya "Kallol Jhala Pure"

lok kashi jagatat he aapan pahatoch, kahinch jagan apalya manala bhural padat tari aapan apalya marganech jagato. Tasach ahe kavitanch...itaranchya kavita vachavyat, pan apanapalya tarhene kavita lihavyat....kay mahit ek diwas tuch ekhada navin kavita prakar sodhun kadashil..

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