रोज वाटत........................

[vaishalichande]

 its too good i loved it

[karna]

bhannat kavita------------
chalu thev tuza kam ajun ashya kavita vachaila avadtil.

[राहुल]

खूपच छान जमली आहे कविता.

[Amolshashi]

Khup Chan.....

[sawant.sugandha@gmail.com]

very nice

[केदार मेहेंदळे]

komal shbd rachana....... khup chan

[sumit1]

khup chan,,awadli...jam awadli...sahire..

[raghav.shastri]

Chan, sundar, mastach,apratim......

[manoj vaichale]

रोज वाटत निजताना
   आज हि आकाशाला भिडणारी
   छान छान स्वप्न पहावी
   पूर्ण करण्याची जबाबदारी माझी
   पण स्वप्न मात्र तुझ्या कुशीत दिसावी

[neel_ihm]

its like u r really romancing with words. u really catch feelings of a couple in very cleverly selected words. keep it up.