पहिली मैत्री..... पहिलं प्रेम..!

[nirmala.]

एकदा हो म्हणून तर बघ ,
तुझ्यासाठी पूर्णपणे स्वताला बदलेन
तुझ्या वाटेतले काटे पापण्यांनी
उचलून फक्त फुलंच त्यावर पसरेन
what a cute lins yar..........

such a nice poemmmm

i do like it.........

the best 1...................

[nirmala.]

hummm....

somewere related to ma life.......
so nice poem yar...good...
keep writing.........

[316.nikhil]

mitra kamal kelis re

[nirmala.]

hi poem itki chan ahe ki punha ekda comment dyawishi watli,........
superb ahe kawita.......

ithpriyant pohochwlis.....
yogya vyakti pariyant nakki pohochaw.......
n b positiv
god bless......
chaann ahe kawita,,,...

[Abhishek D]

yogya wyakti paryant pohochali hoti kevhach hi kawita ...
pan .... kadachit mazhya premawar ticha wishwas rahila navta ...
jau dya .. bt really thanx for the complements .........
kadhitari ti hi samjun gheil ashi asha karto ....

[Prasad Chindarkar]

khupach chan kavita aahe.

[Parvin]

kupch channnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.........................................

[pushkarx650]

apratim kavita ahe .........

[rudra]

are mitra ajun tu maitritach ahes........
ji kon ahe tila vicharun taak...ho bolalitar thik ahe....nahi bolali tar samaj tichyat kahitari falt aahe...............aslya goshtinch kadhi tention nahi ghyaych................

girlfriends r like medicines they always come  with expiry dates...

[Abhishek D]

hey ... i'll definitely ask her soon ... n tuzi ti  line khup mast watali... gf s r like medicines ... mst ..
hahah
thnx