माज्या बा चा बा

[hemant.k008]

shappat.............

dolyat pani datun aale

[raje94]

Aai ani baba yanchya kavita vachlya pan ba cha ba vachun phar vegal vatal je shabdat nahi sangta yenar.
" vyakt n krta yenyasarkhi "

[Vikrant.wadekar04]

so nice ...
khupach chhan mitra

[tusharlad]

sahi...........

[sai23]

mastach hridaysparshi.

[diksha hiwale]

ekdm sahi , jhakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssch khup agdi mnapasun awdli kavita 

[sandip jharekar]

 exellant pakaj......from the bottom of heart....

[गोपिचंद वालकोळी]

Khup imotional keles Pankaj !
Khup chhan kavita keli aahes !

[pankaj zade]

excellent man ..i went to my past in childhood when i visited to my father's village.. my granpa was same as u describe in ur poem.. g8.. lot of thanks

[Rupesh Naik]

खुपच छान