तू जाताना...

Started by designer_sheetal, February 23, 2012, 06:11:43 PM

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designer_sheetal


sheetal patil.

hiiiiiiiii
khare bolis tu patle tuze mhanne mala ,
nakkich thambel janari vyakti ,
virahamule nahi pan premamule tari nakkich....
:) :) :) hasat raha nehmi


SIA

omg!i love this "kavita" umh!!!!!!


Wo nazar kahan se laoo jo unhe bhula de,
Wo dawa kahan se laoo jo dard mita de,
Milna to likha hota hai takdiro me,
Wo takadir kahan se laoo jo mila de......


wah kya bat he yaaaaaarrrrrrrrrr!!!marjava mitjava.......khup chan dear

jyoti salunkhe

very Well Written Sheetal....................

kharya premala pramanachi aani parinamachi garaj lagat nahi .............

aani jar te khar asel tar te swatapasun dur honar nahi ............

pranali hande

very nice poem i like it very much.............Please continue such writing...

pranali hande

Very well written, i like it very much....

Plz cont such writings.......

designer_sheetal

Thanks SIA, Jyoti n Pranali :)

Cheers,

Sheetal