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Offline Talabgaar

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माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« on: March 01, 2010, 12:45:50 AM »
Here's something that I wrote that captures my experience with my hair: The glory of having them and the agony of losing them:-) Please let me know whether you liked it. Any suggestions for improvement would also be welcome:

माळरान
आली चाळीशी म्हणोनी,
काय नसावे रसिक?
मना अधिकच मोहे
आता मोहिका समीप!

पहा पहा सभोवरी
चलपहल चंचल,
त्वरी अनावधाने हात,
उठे झाकण्या टक्कल!


हाय होते जेंव्हा साद्ध्य
माने झुलफे रुळावी,
गृही दंडक वचक,
केसां कातर जुळावी!

मागे पाहता वळोनी
कळे अल्पची सारे न्यारे,
व्यर्थ गुलाबी तंद्रीत,
केले चपट, कानी वारे!

अंमळ उशीरा अक्कल
तरी लाविली शक्कल,
जटा दाहिने वळविली,
तर बाजू डावी ओसाडली!

माथी पुंजके पुंजके
हवे कुंतल सघन,
जाणे तलबगार आता,
येणे पुरते माळरान!

-- © तलबगार
http://talabgaar.blogspot.com
 
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माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« on: March 01, 2010, 12:45:50 AM »

Offline harshalrane

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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2010, 10:26:39 PM »
thik ahe....
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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2010, 07:30:16 PM »
malranacha artha neet kalala!!! :)
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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2010, 11:41:26 AM »
 :) ;) :D ;D
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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #4 on: March 13, 2010, 01:47:15 AM »
पहा पहा सभोवरी
चलपहल चंचल,
त्वरी अनावधाने हात,
उठे झाकण्या टक्कल!

:)  :D Nice
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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2010, 06:37:59 PM »
झाकण्या टक्कल, करावी शक्कल, वापरावी अक्कल 
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Offline tanu

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Re: माळरान: Hair, A Journey through Time
« Reply #6 on: August 20, 2010, 12:48:23 PM »
awesome re :)
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