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केदार मेहेंदळे

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केदार...

Ankush S. Navghare, Palghar

Kedar sir khup chan lihiley. Don oli mazya kadun mazya hindi kavitetil...

Woh kya tha jab tum mereliye hasati thi...
Hum shayar nahi the...
Tumne hume banaya...
Hum ashiq nahi the...
Tumne hume banaya...
Mere jindagi me tumhare jaisi
Ek hi to mashahur hasti thi
Jisame mera dil... Meri jaan...
Meri aatma basati thi...
Woh kya tha jab tum mereliye hasati thi...

Regards...

केदार मेहेंदळे

#2
Kamat Saheb,


Dhanyvad. majhya vinantila man deun tumhi pratikriya detat ani majhya khali gelelya kavta punha var yetat. krupaya roj majhya eka kavitela abhipray dya. tumche upkar mi kadhihi visarnar nahi. charolyanmadhe hi mi baryach charolya post kelyaa ahet. tumhala pahije tar roj majhya eka junya kavitechi kinva charolichi link tumhala mail karin. mhnaje tumhala shodhayala lagnar nahi. aaj majhya"tu an mi" hya  charolichi link khali post keli ahe. Krupaya tumacha abhipray dya karan ti charoli khupach khali geli aahe. tumhi abhipray dilat tar ti var yeil ani punha ajun kahi lok vachatil. :D


http://marathikavita.co.in/index.php/topic,10594.0.html


asach lobh asudya.....   ;) :P :D